ext_49341 ([identity profile] rosethorne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] kageotogi 2004-01-24 01:13 am (UTC)

Put description into the birthday party and what's going on. Give small descriptions of the characters. Show the dialogue between you and Brad rather than summarizing it. Show the amusing chaos that's taking place.
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