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AF Reviews
First off, I posted chapter two of Spin over on Gurabiteshiyon.net. It contains what one reviewer called "realistic sex, but really good". Be forewarned. I used references (thanks to someone's strange need to tell me about his sex life. Ewwww...).
Back on topic. I've gotten a lot of strange reviews for "April Fool", the Gundam Wing story I wrote not too long ago. Which I find odd, since I wrote it in an attempt to make people hate it... All the quote-unquote "mean" reviews I've gotten have been from FanFiction.Net (which has, of course, given me a new respect for the place. They have all the best wannabe-flamers there), but I've also gotten some surprisingly nice reviews, which makes me worry... I didn't want people to like it, after all. Anyway, the following reviews are my favorites so far. My comments are in italics.
Favorite Review Number One
I read this and wished I hadn't. (Yeah, that's about the reaction I was hoping people would have) It wasn't funny at all (newsflash: if it was supposed to be funny, I wouldn't have written it like that), and I will never read another of your fics again (*shrug* your loss. I know I'm not the best--far from it--but I also know that I do have some decent stuff out there. You shouldn't let one story alienate you, buddy). I was dissappointed with what happened to Duo because as others have said feelings do get hurt no matter what the other has done. Duo should get a gun and shove it up both Heeros for being a dickhead and Wufeis arses and pull the trigger (yeah, and people won't hate that at all. Of course not). No one should have their feelings trampled on like that. I used to like Wufei and Heero, this story made me hate them (ever so sorry that you've grown to hate fictional characters because of this story, but I wouldn't go around telling me things like that. It could encourage me and we all know we wouldn't want that).
Favorite Review Number Two
Bitch (aw, you're too kind. WAY to kind). I can't believe that you did that to Duo (believe it, girly. He's fictional. I can do whatever the hell I want). Damn it. It's cool though . . . in an annoying kind of way (wait... what? Cool? Does... not... compute...). They didn't even get to the good part! (...)
Favorite Review Number Three
YOU EVIL, EVIL PERSON (why thank you)! that is so wrong (so is your lack of capitilization skills, but do you see me complaining?). but why do i get the feeling someone had a bad april fools joke pulled on them (beats me)? I could be wrong, of course... (and you are. Stop trying to pretend you know how my mind works; you're not a psychologist. Just because I like to fuck other people over doesn't mean I'm using displacement to put my own feelings and such on them. Don't be dumb.)
Back on topic. I've gotten a lot of strange reviews for "April Fool", the Gundam Wing story I wrote not too long ago. Which I find odd, since I wrote it in an attempt to make people hate it... All the quote-unquote "mean" reviews I've gotten have been from FanFiction.Net (which has, of course, given me a new respect for the place. They have all the best wannabe-flamers there), but I've also gotten some surprisingly nice reviews, which makes me worry... I didn't want people to like it, after all. Anyway, the following reviews are my favorites so far. My comments are in italics.
Favorite Review Number One
I read this and wished I hadn't. (Yeah, that's about the reaction I was hoping people would have) It wasn't funny at all (newsflash: if it was supposed to be funny, I wouldn't have written it like that), and I will never read another of your fics again (*shrug* your loss. I know I'm not the best--far from it--but I also know that I do have some decent stuff out there. You shouldn't let one story alienate you, buddy). I was dissappointed with what happened to Duo because as others have said feelings do get hurt no matter what the other has done. Duo should get a gun and shove it up both Heeros for being a dickhead and Wufeis arses and pull the trigger (yeah, and people won't hate that at all. Of course not). No one should have their feelings trampled on like that. I used to like Wufei and Heero, this story made me hate them (ever so sorry that you've grown to hate fictional characters because of this story, but I wouldn't go around telling me things like that. It could encourage me and we all know we wouldn't want that).
Favorite Review Number Two
Bitch (aw, you're too kind. WAY to kind). I can't believe that you did that to Duo (believe it, girly. He's fictional. I can do whatever the hell I want). Damn it. It's cool though . . . in an annoying kind of way (wait... what? Cool? Does... not... compute...). They didn't even get to the good part! (...)
Favorite Review Number Three
YOU EVIL, EVIL PERSON (why thank you)! that is so wrong (so is your lack of capitilization skills, but do you see me complaining?). but why do i get the feeling someone had a bad april fools joke pulled on them (beats me)? I could be wrong, of course... (and you are. Stop trying to pretend you know how my mind works; you're not a psychologist. Just because I like to fuck other people over doesn't mean I'm using displacement to put my own feelings and such on them. Don't be dumb.)
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I'm so glad that Reviewer Number One isn't actually writing anything substantial, because his phrasing is inane and his sentence structuring is awful. Do you hear me Reviewer Number One? Fucking learn how to write a complete and meaningful sentence that degrades people before you flame.
In other words: you suck, you ignorant twit.
Love you Cathy!
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