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Quick!fic rec.
Oct. 12th, 2005 08:43 amQuick!fic rec... Sort of.
Are you...? by Mari. It's on the Gurabite latest list.
"Are You" isn't exactly Grade A material -- i.e., it's not the best out there, but the author shows some real potential, and she doesn't seem to be a screaming moron, which is a plus. I think Mari could write some great stuff, provided she got the right encouragement and worked a bit on her format, English-laws, and dialogue. She knows her characters but doesn't seem quite sure how to get them from point A to point B, so she interjects and breaks into the story every now and again.
So "Are You" is a very short piece that some of the Gravi writers may want to spend a moment or two to look at. It's getting hard to find potential on an archive that is slowly becoming cluttered with shtuff, so I'm relishing what I find.
Are you...? by Mari. It's on the Gurabite latest list.
"Are You" isn't exactly Grade A material -- i.e., it's not the best out there, but the author shows some real potential, and she doesn't seem to be a screaming moron, which is a plus. I think Mari could write some great stuff, provided she got the right encouragement and worked a bit on her format, English-laws, and dialogue. She knows her characters but doesn't seem quite sure how to get them from point A to point B, so she interjects and breaks into the story every now and again.
So "Are You" is a very short piece that some of the Gravi writers may want to spend a moment or two to look at. It's getting hard to find potential on an archive that is slowly becoming cluttered with shtuff, so I'm relishing what I find.
