Stories.

Feb. 10th, 2008 10:56 am
kageotogi: (writer's life [kageotogi])
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[livejournal.com profile] grandsummoner is taking a Creative Writing course, and at some point the class was asked to study the significance of Hemingway's famous six-word story:

For sale: baby shoes, never worn.

In short (no pun intended), the idea is to tell a full story in as few words as possible. In her latest entry, she asked people to reply with their own six-word stories, preferably ones that described them as people. Mine were:

Wanted: weary writer seeks finished product.

Oldest tree fails to weather storm.

January interrupted by warm summer winds.

Lovers. High tide. Two mothers mourn.


I think it's a good exercise, and I'm curious. If you have the time and inclination, post a story in six (or seven) words or less. It doesn't have to be about you -- just make a coherent story out of as little as possible.

Date: 2008-02-10 05:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] grandsummoner.livejournal.com
^_^

New ones:

The factory doesn't produce enough talent

Buttercups bloom, snowflakes perish, I see

I hope someone likes this sentence~ *dies*


Date: 2008-02-11 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Oooh, those are nice! I like the factory idea. ♥

Date: 2008-02-10 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
No paradise: heart outweighed the feather.

hijacked chapter four

Date: 2008-02-10 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
Suguru grudgingly gives in. Tatsuha succeeds.

Date: 2008-02-11 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
Tatsuha gloats; Suguru purchases a larger bed.
Edited Date: 2008-02-11 01:27 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-11 02:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masteroftrouble.livejournal.com
Awe, but that's seven letters!

Date: 2008-02-11 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
.... seven words, you mean? |D and yeah i just realized that.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Tatsuha would gloat. The ass.

Eiri finds out; the couple retreats.

Date: 2008-02-12 01:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
Only briefly, however; Tatsuha is undeterred.

Date: 2008-02-12 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Suguru has more shame; he shies.

Date: 2008-02-12 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
Tatsuha doesn't allow that for long.

Date: 2008-02-12 02:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Suguru calls rape and demurs.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
You should do one. >D

Date: 2008-02-11 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masteroftrouble.livejournal.com
Okay.

Need job. Take anything. Hire me!

Date: 2008-02-11 07:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
You could put that on your resume~!

Date: 2008-02-11 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masteroftrouble.livejournal.com
Doubt they'll accept it, though.

Date: 2008-02-11 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
...that is true.

...
*hires you*

Re: hijacked chapter four

Date: 2008-02-11 02:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
HEESQUEE.

...speaking of which, when do I get more Hijacked?

Re: hijacked chapter four

Date: 2008-02-12 01:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elevates.livejournal.com
when you write that fluff/angst-fic~ ♥

Re: hijacked chapter four

Date: 2008-02-12 02:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Ohyeah. Er.

Eiri is cruel; Shuichi loves it.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Very ancient Egyptian of you.

Date: 2008-02-10 08:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
Oldest tree succeeds in weathering storm.

February is awesome. Spring comes soon.

Got the funk: dance with me.

Her life was a beautiful song.

Strawbery bootlaces are red strings of happiness.

Yummy gummy worms beat weather storms.

(I'm all for happy stories at the moment - can you tell? XD)

Date: 2008-02-10 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
I forgot to tell you: This idea is great! I absolutely love coming up with stuff, counting words and making sure they make sense.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
I liked it! Pass it along. >D

Date: 2008-02-11 02:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
(So could. XD)

Strawberry bootlaces?

Date: 2008-02-11 05:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
Something I got from my Boosh watching.
Strawberry bootlaces are these thin red round strings that taste of... strawberry. gummy worms, but thin and shoelace-like instead of those broad sour make-your-buttcheeks-clench types. =D

As always, I wanna hump that icon. XD Butt nuzzle!

Date: 2008-02-11 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
I'm sure Miguel and Tulio wouldn't mind if you joined in~

Date: 2008-02-11 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
Au contraire. I think they would. XD
It looks like a pretty exclusive party... hehe.

Date: 2008-02-11 10:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
So not. Did you not see the movie? They totally bang everyone.

Date: 2008-02-11 10:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
I must've missed that part. Damnit!

Date: 2008-02-11 10:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Sad. It totally happened, you know.

Date: 2008-02-11 11:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iniq.livejournal.com
Only one solution to that problem, really. Rewatch! =D

Date: 2008-02-11 11:06 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-10 08:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vetes3.livejournal.com
Flu Survivor Stuck Indoors

Sorry only thing I can think of is about being sick and the post I just made a few minutes ago.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Aw.

At least flu season is almost over!

Date: 2008-02-11 04:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ex-heteropho927.livejournal.com
Sunday night procrastination: undeterred, monday looms.

Ha, I don't even know if thats correct punctuation-wise.

Date: 2008-02-11 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
I think it is. Either way, it's clever and lovely.

Date: 2008-02-12 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] punkheid.livejournal.com
Hours before the presentation: hard-drive crash.

Heh. And ack.

Your last one is very good.

Date: 2008-02-12 07:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kageotogi.livejournal.com
Oooh. That one is very good.

Thanks. ^^ I was trying to throw in some alliteration.

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